Panel 1
Lorraine
Reilly is talking. This is a close-up,
so that we only see her face. Variations
of this will populate the next four panels.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Ladies and gentlemen of these United States, and all those watching
around the world, I stand before you at a moment of profound crisis.
Panel 2
Variation on
Lorraine talking.
LORRAINE
REILLY: This is a crisis of our own deliberate making.
Panel 3
Variation on
Lorraine talking.
LORRAINE
REILLY: When I was elected to the office of the vice presidency, I never
imagined any of this would happen, much less ascending to the presidency
itself. The matter of my former
existence as a superhero known as Firehawk was simply not relevant at that
time. No one talked about it. I earned my political stripes the same way as
everyone else.
Panel 4
Variation on
Lorraine talking.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Yet now, the only word anyone has on their lips when they speak of me
is “Firehawk.” Superhero. And suddenly that is a bad thing.
Panel 5
Variation on
Lorraine talking.
LORRAINE
REILLY: I am not here to talk about myself, or superheroes, but the state of
the nation as a whole. As I have said,
we at are in the midst of crisis, and I find that I am in a unique position to
talk about it, for exactly the reason everyone talks about…
Panel 6
Black panel
with text.
TITLE: “Independence
Day”
Panel 7
Black panel
with text.
WRITER: Tony
Laplume
Panel 8
Lorraine has
transformed into Firehawk, but otherwise the focus is the same.
LORRAINE
REILLY: …but not as they are going about it now, not in a way that tears us
apart, but in the same spirit in which I at one time proudly flew in the
heavens as the superhero called Firehawk.
Panel 9
Silent
panel. Firehawk is looking with steely
resolve (with a hint of disgust) at something we can’t see.
PAGE TWO
Panel 1
Wide shot
around Firehawk, in which we see she has been standing inside the chambers of
the House of Representatives, in the midst of the State of the Union
address. We see Karma floating above the
assembled congressmen.
CAPTION:
Chambers of the House of Representatives, US Capitol
KARMA: Allow
me to summarize for you!
KARMA: The
state of the union is rotten!
Panel 2
Karma is
speaking to the assembled congressmen now.
KARMA: Your
president has lied to you! Misled
you! Woven false narratives around you!
KARMA: She
will say anything she thinks she has to just so she can continue to control the
message!
KARMA: Is that
what your democracy is about, Americans?
Panel 3
Firehawk has
risen into the air toward Karma.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Democracy in this country began with angry men who yearned for
change. They stopped at nothing to
achieve their goals. They threw a tea
party in Boston harbor. They threw away
the trash.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Let me attempt to replicate that here today.
PAGE THREE
Panel 1
Both
Firehawk and Karma are unleashing concussive blasts at each other, and the
blasts are meeting in the middle.
Panel 2
They’re
holding at considerable strain the concussive blasts. We see some of the congressmen begin
transforming into Man-Bats, with great alarm arising from those around them.
Panel 3
Firehawk
breaks off her blast directed at Karma to redirect at the emerging Man-Bats.
Panel 4
As a result,
she’s hit with a renewed blast from Karma.
PAGE FOUR
Panel 1
We find
Firehawk in the upper balcony of the chambers, amidst some of the ordinary
people and guests who are always present at these addresses. Among them we can actually see superheroes,
some of whom are in costume and some of whom aren’t. We see Jason Rusch, who at one time was a part
of the Firestorm matrix with Lorraine.
There’s also Blue Beetle, the armored Jaime Reyes version; Fire, ablaze
in her green flame; Sasha Bordeaux, with her metallic eye, who was once part of
the government agency Checkmate but is once again a civilian; and Guy Gardner.
GUY GARDNER:
White Martians.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Exactly. Her, too.
Panel 2
Now it’s
Firehawk’s turn to address the congressmen around them.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Behold Karma!
Panel 3
Firehawk and
Fire share a look.
Panel 4
They both
unleash flame at Karma.
Panel 5
Karma, along
with the Man-Bats, are transforming into their White Martian forms. There is increased alarm and outrage sweeping
through the chambers.
PAGE FIVE
Panel 1
Karma,
having reconstituted her superhero guise, shrieks in rage.
Panel 2
She’s now
building up an ominous-looking charge, worse than the blasts she’s been using
to this point.
Panel 3
The charge
is growing bigger. You can see
congressmen backing away from it, some of them outright running away.
Panel 4
She has now
lobbed the charge, not at Firehawk but the fleeing congressmen. And yet Firehawk is moving to intercept it.
PAGE SIX
Panel 1
Great pain
registers on Firehawk’s face as she’s hit with the charge, which explodes into
a blinding light.
Panel 2
Firehawk is
now absorbing the light, renewed determination on her face. Karma looks on in astonishment. This was her biggest gun.
Panel 3
A smoldering
Firehawk has turned her attention back to Karma, fury filling her eyes.
PAGE SEVEN
Panel 1
Firehawk has
once again risen into the air, triumphant.
Behind her are Fire and Blue Beetle, as well as Martian Manhunter, who
must have been disguised earlier, but now out in the open.
LORRAINE
REILLY: Now, Karma.
Panel 2
Tighter
focus on Firehawk again.
LORRAINE
REILLY: We can continue this charade, or end it.
PAGE EIGHT
Panel 1
Jack Ryder’s
show! He’s standing just outside the Capitol.
JACK RYDER: …went
on to continue harping on her version of our “angry men” founders, claiming
that if there was any tradition in America, it was constant discontent.
Panel 2
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
Clearly just another deflection.
Everyone I’ve spoken with about the speech agrees that it changes
nothing, nor the rather impressive confrontation with the ambassador of hope,
Karma, who turned out to be a White Martian all along.
Panel 3
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
But what did that really prove? What was
the point of the president’s theatrics?
Swooping in to save the day again?
Please!
Panel 4
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
Everyone saw the chambers packed with her superhero friends! Even Guy Gardner was there! Yet another misbegotten recipient of
President Reilly’s rash pardons.
Panel 5
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
It seems the more she gets wrong the more she’s prepared to snub her nose at
the public’s rejection of her!
Panel 6
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
To what end?
Panel 7
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
I’m not alone in spotting the Martian Manhunter among her cronies? Who’s to say we could ever have taken him at
his word at being a “good” Martian? We’ve
now known the truth of the nature of the Martians for years.
Panel 8
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
And they have been among us. And they
are here still. And we have the
superheroes to thank for it.
Panel 9
Jack’s show
continues.
JACK RYDER:
But what if the so-called superheroes have been the villains all along?
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